Reviews for Hope Is The Sun
half-sketched.staccatos chapter 1 . 4/11/2007
konichiwa

Wow, I love that last line - such amazing imagery: "like a dream on fire". I really love it!

Paalam

-Shan-
Awen1923 chapter 1 . 2/8/2007
I really like the first line - it creates a very good image. This poem reads very well. Nicely done.