Des is full of shit , I'm so angry right now

wow this is so f'd up

:-O:-O:-O

Whaaat?
O.M.G

very good

*sighs* wow...good/great/long story, even if I have to admit there's a lot of typos ) gets confusing at one point or another, but ya'll know, it can manage xD

but i don't really like the ending ._. i know I know, i'm in no place to be picky about it; after all, i'm not the writer, you are. )

anyhow! I hope you have a sequal to this o_o; *I didn't check, i WILL check right about when i finish this review though*

great story, too short! ) lalalalalalalala

Aw, story is over, but I know there will be another one, thats why I'm not so sad. The ending was actually good, I liked it. Gave you a sense thath obviously theres more to come. The whole story was awesome.

NO it can't be over!

Nice ending, really did not see that coming. Lana's going to have some problems with the arrangment if it actually happens. Going to be interesting. And nope don't think it's weird that you associate the songs with them. Update soon.

YAY UPDATE!

I'd love to see what would go on if Kim actually lived with Des and Lana. That would definitely be an interesting read. Update soon! Please!

Des's song is "What I've Done" by Linkin Park.

At least, thats my thought.

hey! just found this story and read it till i reached the last chapter. lol. love it. love the characters!

update soon please!

I'm liking it; you could see more in depth to Lana in this chapter, with how she felt really upset at the way Dirk was treating Des. This whole Kim and Des thing is really strange, I just want to know what Des really wants, she says she wants Lana and everything then lets see Kim and Des resolve whatever it is that it keeping them together like this. Part of me is thinking Des really can't just kick Kim out of the picture. Don't know. But I'm really excited about the whole knew series with it, sounds like its going to be good. Can't wait.

Update soon, can't wait to read more