|Reviews for spirit|
| Rainpuddle chapter 1 . 1/4/2008
this is the sound of me being blown away...
| notated descant chapter 1 . 2/22/2007
the brackets between each main line gives it an undertone of desperation- like you're trying to stay calm, but you're restless and desperate on the inside. Effective! Good job!
| eldrin chapter 1 . 2/10/2007
"You're just a hitch in my mind control" is a wonderful line - immensely descriptive, and oh-so right.
I see that you've left me plenty of poems to catch up on...I'll get to them all eventually.