Reviews for Infiltrate, Destroy, Rebuild
missmarymacintosh chapter 4 . 4/30/2011
This is great! I wish there was more!
Cerulean San chapter 1 . 9/14/2010
I wanted to say I love the idea of this story-and I heard you had a completed version of that before? D: That sounds so appealing. Anyways, I hope you get this. Respond por favor
HoPELeSS.RoMaNTiiC chapter 1 . 4/18/2010
Will you be finishing this.?.
Hwangish Sally chapter 3 . 11/30/2009
I liked the original version better. This seems to be heading in a cliche direction.
crystal blue sky chapter 4 . 3/3/2009
i'm in love with your writing

your style is so captiating...

this story is rather sad and i can understand why Maria is so distrusting. i'm not sure if you mean for her to be really beautiful or just pretty, but i think that if she's beautiful you need to put more emphasis on that

i like Nicholas Demidov, he sounds like a promising character.

is it his son that rapes her?

please get the next chap out soon...? BIG cherry on top D

-CSB
Lesumi chapter 1 . 2/7/2009
I love your works A
Naoise chapter 4 . 2/6/2009
I love this story. I'm just slightly confused, has Nicholas Demidov never seen Maria? I'm just wondering because in Songbird and even when you first posted it here on FP it was Nicholas who molested her. Wasn't it? Ignore me if you explain this in later chapters.

Anyway amazing story. The plot is new and interesting, not old and cliché (too much).
Naoise chapter 1 . 2/6/2009
I remember Songbird. I like your writing. Romantic elements with a nice healthy dose of cynicism. This rewrite looks good! I can't wait to read more.
hello chapter 4 . 1/30/2009
“Yeah, well my sister got an into honours remember?” An into?
l'heautontimoroumenos chapter 4 . 1/29/2009
Great story. You must update. You ahve to update. I won't let you not update. Is that clear?
FM Radio chapter 4 . 1/22/2009
Please update soon! PLEASE! This is amazing i really like the rewrite so far!
akaCHEEKS chapter 4 . 1/15/2009
woah. you totally changed the plot. so is she really deaf? or did they just put a chip in her ear to make her stop hearing?
pretitiful chapter 4 . 1/14/2009
hm. i new character. wolf. like the name.

looking forward for the next chapter :)
hello chapter 3 . 1/11/2009
Just to quickly point out, 'He needed information, damn it and he’d make this lying deceitful bitch was going to talk!' needs structural stability. That's all.
MsQueenOfTheWorld chapter 3 . 1/11/2009
This won't end well.
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