|Reviews for Piles of Regret|
| Tragic Bliss chapter 1 . 2/8/2007
so little words, yet still so sad. kind of chilling how you can get your point across so simply, yet so dramatically.
| Basara chapter 1 . 2/7/2007
rest in peace... yet like a person leaving for good... it sadden's one's heart...
| magnusthewolf chapter 1 . 2/6/2007
very beautiful imagery here and nice emotion. i liked it :) magnus
| sunscraped chapter 1 . 2/6/2007
The last two lines were wonderful, but the first just strikes me as odd. Mentioning bones certainly pulls in your audience, yes, but once you take stock of the situation, you realize the absurdity of the first line. The bizarre sight of bones on the ground would prompt one to bury them in respect before indulging myself in grief (which I somehow equated to self-pity here). Correct me if I'm wrong.
| Princess-anna57 chapter 1 . 2/6/2007
Wow, that's really sad. Powerful haiku. I like it a lot. Keep writing!