|Reviews for 再見, 我的愛|
| CynChan chapter 1 . 2/27/2007
I like it a lot! :) (I CAN READ IT YAY!)
The Chinese phrases fit "perfectly" (is there such thing as perfect? lol ;;)
I really like your choice of words. It's really powerful. None of your words are redundant (except conjunctions which are obvious). I like how you had many different verbs. And I like the ending comparison. It was very cute. ] Keep up with the writing
| Ivory Clover chapter 2 . 2/20/2007
I like this one. Very powerful. I love your use of Chinese to better express the feelings involved. I'm glad for the translations, though, cause without them (for me) the picture isn't complete.
| xxImmortalFirexx chapter 2 . 2/8/2007
I personally like this one because I am asian and chinese was my first language. Your poem plays a soft, sad melody, and your fluency is great, keep up the good work.