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just to burn chapter 1 . 10/11/2009
Short and to the point.

no.peace.los.angeles chapter 1 . 2/16/2007
Oh, I like that. And I know the feeling of only being able to write bits & pieces of poems. I go through those periods occasionally, too, and I have tons of unfinished poems in my poetry notebook at the moment, usually titled "shit" or something equally as descriptive. Who knows - I may come back to them later. But I do like this in its brevity - I once wrote a poem that was 2 lines long and 8 words total. It was pretty amazing. I just couldn't think of anything else that wouldn't have paled in comparison to what I had written. Anyway, nice work. Keep writing! :)
in a jar pk chapter 1 . 2/15/2007
i really love how you were able to convey so much thought and emotion in so few words. many people try and fail lol. love it. x