Reviews for Why oh Why
a silenced revolution chapter 1 . 3/7/2007
Homelessness isn't a word? Since when? I've always thought it was, it's on dictionary dot com... Oh well. Great poem tho. Keep writing!
The Silent Wickerman chapter 1 . 2/10/2007
makes me think about how modern society worships money... Well, good job...Oh and by the way? I'm a total advocate of using made up words... I swear i would start a war over it.

Keep Rockin' - The Silent Wickerman
Ryosuke-Segami chapter 1 . 2/7/2007
Heh. I really like your style. It's short, sweet, and straight to the point, while managing to flow together. The idea is VERY good in this one and you did a great job of getting your point across, even with the short lines.

No complaints. Great job.