Reviews for Pretend
Kayleigh - clumsybella15 chapter 1 . 6/17/2008
Wow, that girl at school... Let's say it's a message to her. Brilliant poem, love the way you have such short lines. Great last line, "Think about it."


PS: I managed to get here through Google... I won't explain. You know the story.
Wir1wind0001 chapter 1 . 3/4/2007
i totally agree with this! i know exactly what you are talking about...there's a bunch of beyotches like that at my school too!
Black and White Dreams chapter 1 . 2/10/2007
Sounds like a few girls I know. I wish I could say all that to them. This is exactly how I feel most of the time about them. Vivid imagery, here. You're brilliant! _

~Black and White Dreams~