This is so cute and sad at the same time. :D

Oh, absolutely wonderful!

I wish there were more stories like this one.

You have a very interesting, romantic plot.

It was so romantic.

I love it!

AW! So SAD, yet so squeal worthy! Well, it had a happy ending so I guess its all good!

Amazing! You can say so much with so few words. You are so talented, I am thrilled to have found your stories.

What a man wouldn't do to win his way back to the side of the one he loved.

The part between Inkiza's decision to take revenge and the barbarian invasion was a little vague on how long it had been. I couldn't tell exactly where the leap was and how long it was (I did figure out the time later).

That was...was...*brain melts out her ears* Though I was thrown a bit by the time skips. You might want to put in something that divides them a bit more efficiently. That was, however, my only grievance with this story. I am in love with Ebedi, by the way. love. :3

Thanks for the read!

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that was so aweswome!

lovely!

very much enjoyed reading this, especially the part where Inkiza took initiative and made the first move. That he was the one who did that made me happy. The only thing that confused me a bit in the story was how much time passed, how, and when. I had trouble catching the time-skips as they were just sentences and did not differ from any other part of the story.

Thank you for sharing the story.

the only thing that bothered me was the confusion with the time change from when inkiza was denied the throne and the barbarian invasion (i think there might have been a separation there, but it's now missing).

other than that...

OH MY GOD. SO SEXY.

i love how inkiza went from timid prince to really really carnal hot. i'm fanning myself.

im lovin it! hahaha..the story are so cool..the way you make it im confuse..o_O because Ebedi is a barbarian so they supposed to be a king in the barbarian clan is it? so is it Ebedi the king or Ebedi is descendants of the king..cause im a little a bit confuse on that part on why can he conquer kingdom..

*squeals and rolls around* A bit on the bloody side but very much enjoyable. Bravo and once more thank you thank you thank you for sharing your wonderful imagination with the rest of us!

wow...just, wow. you are amazing! this story is going straight to favorites.

aw! sweet. tad terrifying. but sweet none the less!

This one REALLY got me. I was crying like the sad sap I am when Ebedi got taken away.

I'm the type to really be taken away-transported into well written stories. And the utter destruction Inkiza would have felt right then would have been to much for me to bare.

I notice you have a liking for really strange names xD. Don't get me wrong, I love em, but it's like you're throwing darts at letters and putting them into a name. xD I love it!