Reviews for By Moonlight
NoAhDorable chapter 1 . 9/27/2009
This is so cute and sad at the same time. :D
DeviWan chapter 1 . 8/15/2009
Oh, absolutely wonderful!

I wish there were more stories like this one.

You have a very interesting, romantic plot.

It was so romantic.

I love it!
Keona Raynalise chapter 1 . 8/12/2009
AW! So SAD, yet so squeal worthy! Well, it had a happy ending so I guess its all good!
paradox13 chapter 1 . 7/13/2009
Amazing! You can say so much with so few words. You are so talented, I am thrilled to have found your stories.
frogs of war chapter 1 . 3/28/2009
What a man wouldn't do to win his way back to the side of the one he loved.

The part between Inkiza's decision to take revenge and the barbarian invasion was a little vague on how long it had been. I couldn't tell exactly where the leap was and how long it was (I did figure out the time later).
stick and straw chapter 1 . 3/8/2009
That was...was...*brain melts out her ears* Though I was thrown a bit by the time skips. You might want to put in something that divides them a bit more efficiently. That was, however, my only grievance with this story. I am in love with Ebedi, by the way. love. :3
chanilow chapter 1 . 12/12/2008
Thanks for the read!
Twin Eclipse chapter 1 . 3/24/2008

that was so aweswome!

Awe chapter 1 . 3/22/2008
very much enjoyed reading this, especially the part where Inkiza took initiative and made the first move. That he was the one who did that made me happy. The only thing that confused me a bit in the story was how much time passed, how, and when. I had trouble catching the time-skips as they were just sentences and did not differ from any other part of the story.

Thank you for sharing the story.
b chapter 1 . 3/16/2008
the only thing that bothered me was the confusion with the time change from when inkiza was denied the throne and the barbarian invasion (i think there might have been a separation there, but it's now missing).

other than that...


i love how inkiza went from timid prince to really really carnal hot. i'm fanning myself.
nomy chapter 1 . 12/28/2007
im lovin it! hahaha..the story are so cool..the way you make it im confuse..o_O because Ebedi is a barbarian so they supposed to be a king in the barbarian clan is it? so is it Ebedi the king or Ebedi is descendants of the king..cause im a little a bit confuse on that part on why can he conquer kingdom..
Seirvitas chapter 1 . 10/29/2007
*squeals and rolls around* A bit on the bloody side but very much enjoyable. Bravo and once more thank you thank you thank you for sharing your wonderful imagination with the rest of us!
FanoraJane chapter 1 . 7/17/2007
wow...just, wow. you are amazing! this story is going straight to favorites. chapter 1 . 6/2/2007
aw! sweet. tad terrifying. but sweet none the less!
SarahDoo chapter 1 . 3/21/2007
This one REALLY got me. I was crying like the sad sap I am when Ebedi got taken away.

I'm the type to really be taken away-transported into well written stories. And the utter destruction Inkiza would have felt right then would have been to much for me to bare.

I notice you have a liking for really strange names xD. Don't get me wrong, I love em, but it's like you're throwing darts at letters and putting them into a name. xD I love it!
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