I have to say, that was interesting. And you probably will die..

My friend Leah Jane reccomended this to me, and I have to say, this is quite funny. I would defintely be interested in reading more, and I believe that Leah would be too. Keep up the good work!

~TirzahRuth

Please write more. I really liked it although at times it did seem a bit awkward. Perhaps it's just me...anyway I found it to be very funny

xD Can't... breathe... lol

LMFAO let me say that your penname is the greatest thing ever. "Poplocking"? XD Did I ever mention how much I look up to your email address, too? LMAO The best thing ever.

OK, let's see. I REALLY liked this piece. It's so whimsical and reeked of AWESEOMENESS, and I really don't know what else to say. Because it's JUST THAT GOOD. The grammar was fantastic, and seriously? I didn't find anything wrong with it! :) Maybe it's because I just woke up, but THAT'S OK. Because you know, it's still fine, it's still fine. 8D

Kyle is amazing, and it was so funny how Turnip was like, "YOU DON'T GET TO SLEEP WITH WOMEN. YOU'LL BASICALLY BE CASTRATED THE MINUTE YOU SIGN THE CONTRACT, SO THERE."

Ahahahah this was amazing, seriously. I hate fantasy, but this is just WOW. XD

-Nghi

*attempts to breathe* That's hilarious. I couldn't stop laughing. Especially the language bit. That was very clever

P.S. Don't worry, I'm a great lover of fantasy and I have no intention of killing you