Reviews for Too Late
glamorous-giggly-guy chapter 1 . 2/27/2007
Wow. This is so raw I suppose. I can just see you sitting in your room on your bed scribling hastily into a notebook, the flow irrepressible...

I REALLY like it.
Rrrararrrrrri'maracecaronlynot chapter 1 . 2/8/2007
For some reason this reminded me of Finch.. _

lol... I dunno

it was good though :D
Midnight In Eden chapter 1 . 2/8/2007
Apart from your first two lines I really got into this. It's a pretty great read and flow.

Only suggestion is about your first two lines, dark is such an abstract and boring adjective, mix it up.

Otherwise, I really liked it.