Reviews for Just A Dreamer
CrazyTurtles chapter 1 . 2/12/2007
I so agree! I love it :D
she smolders chapter 1 . 2/11/2007
How true and yet still hard to accomplish.
Basara chapter 1 . 2/11/2007
true... oh soo true... I believe, these people are the "what happened?" ones...

candy girl chapter 1 . 2/9/2007
true! keep up the truthful poetry.
a silenced revolution chapter 1 . 2/9/2007
Quite true. Reminds me of the quote "The world needs dreamers and the world needs doers, but most of all, the world needs dreamers who do."

Anyways, I'll tell you what you probably already know, which is that the syllables are off for a haiku. But I like it.
Ashelin chapter 1 . 2/9/2007
Short, sweet, and to the point. That is true, you should go for your dreams, and then you can make them a reality. Great job.
Wylloa chapter 1 . 2/9/2007
not in traditional Haiku form, but a beautiful work none the less.
fairytale failure chapter 1 . 2/9/2007
Simple, but touching and thoughtful. From a reader's perspective, I would suggest you take out the word 'just' in the first line. This would give you the right number of syllables for a haiku in the first line, and the reader would not realize a dreamer is something to improve on until the third line.
Which Mistake am I chapter 1 . 2/9/2007
haha this so me sadly...but i love it!