Soo I guess this is a long shot... considering you haven't updated in a long, long time. But I figured I'd leave a review and say how much I absolutely ADORE this story. And hey, it was written before all of the Vampire/Werewolf phases REALLY started... so you can be proud of that. Anyway I hope you get a sudden spark of creativity and write another chapter. Because I would love you forever if you did that. And yeah, *poof* you're inspired. (;

i cant believ she ended on a cliff hanger. That is sooooo cruel. This story is pretty great so far tho.

you should update this :)

Another good story! _

Thats a cruel cliffhanger!

Great story! The humour and sarcasm of the main character in chapter 1 drew me into the story. Thanks!

I really enjoy the idea of this story so far and I adore the two main characters, but you seem to be mixing up which set of parents is which in this last chapter xD

Hello. First off, I really like your stories and can tell you have a mind filled with wonderful, creative ideas.

This story is pretty good. Personally, I think you are very dialogue-orientated and could add in some descriptions. Also, you seem to have a slight problem with development. You don't really explain much, as in.. take for instance the Kiss and Tell chapter. Anna's feelings had just kinda been thrown in there all of a sudden. It's best to thread in hints within a story, leading up to the exposure. I also think there's some unrealistic elements to the story, as in Lyra and Tabitha both just happen to be gay and supernatural. Like obviously that's the focus of the story, but it's all "Hey, you're gay? Me too." Maybe it could have been more of a coming out thing. Everything seems to happen suddenly so the plot can be mildly jagged. Just, when you're writing, try to put yourself in your character's eyes. Describe what they see, smell, feel, etc, and especially what they feel figuratively. I really liked your description of when Lyra was transforming, because that was detailed and you could tell how Tabitha was feeling at that moment. That's all the advice I have. Happy writing and keep it up. I look forward to see more of this story.

love it can not wait for more

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oh la la, is that suggestiveness in that last line? lol

I can't wait to see what happens next

Great job with this one. I love the whole helping out the pack thing; I think it was cute. I'll be looking forward to your next chapter. :)

Nice Chapter! I look forward to reading the next!

a lesbian vampire who's a hunter?A lesbian lyra?huhWell good story!

good story!for sum1 so perky tabitha seems cruel!