Ok this has gotten totally weird, but it's still an interesting take on both characters. Though the vampire theories, well, I guess it'll take time to get used to that. I'll have to see how you work that into the story.

Though it does take away a little of the mysticism of the creatures stripping them down like that.

And the constant used of the words 'werewolf and vampire' still seems a bit redundant. It you're trying to make them seem like normal people, it would be best not to address them as 'the werewolf and the vampire nearly everything they're together, just a thought.

I can't wait to see where this goes, you have a lot of different paths you could take with it. I can't wait to read more!

Interesting chapter.

I like the turn of events and how you allow your readers to do some thinking for themselves at the beginning.

Not to mention I really did laugh at the last line.

Cant what to see what will happen next.

Your take in werewolves is quite interesting. I enjoyed the comedic side of the family life. It was a breath of fresh air to see the subject taking an almost light hearted approach, rather than the cliched ' ultra cool' Underworld gothic themes.

One small thing that bugged me was specifically addressing the main characters by what they were, werewolf and huntress. I know that was probably to set the mood and add tension, but almost felt forcefully reminding the obvious.

Outside of that I really enjoyed the first chapter. And your take on werewolves is definitely going in a good direction. It feels more modern, and her mom is funny. Though that is a really dark way to end the chapter!

I really like this one at the moment. Maybe because I am captivated by the thought of werewolves but mostly because this story already has a very important conflict playing out.

A few errors but nothing too big

Cant wait to see where this story will go.

Ha, that's pretty good. Are you going to let this one continue too? Well, I like all of your stories, but you're going to end up stacking too much on your plate if you keep releasing new stories to update like this. I enjoy reading them though! Keep it up.