Too much hardcore yaoi for the first chapter... you gave me a nosebleed... and i'm anemic, i like yaoi but in small doses... lower the yaoi content a bit or at least make it not too detailed

ALIENS.

ALIENS?

ALIENS, SERIOUSLY? Come on, Indiana.

How nostalgic! I remember when you passed me said story! I was in Mr.B's class (eating, as usual) and SQUEALED WITH GIRLISH GLEE. Mr.B asked me if I needed to go outside...(Manny was LOLING, per the norm.)

Heh. Blaine's jealous. Cute. :D(And PR Blayne is FING ANNOYING. Let's KILL HIM.)

Ahaha, thanks for the recognition. (I'm a guy, thank you.) This chapter was EXACTLY what I was craving for. I must say, I'm becoming more and more enamored of the Aidan x Will pairing.

When you say "Comic - Con", I assume you mean the one in San Diego? (I live up north in Santa Cruz, sadly.) I'd been hoping to go to that. I hope you have fun.

Wow! you updated really fast! it was a good chapter and provided a nice background. thankyou for updating!

omg so good! but blaine is still a jerk fro making aiden upset!

wow another chapter i'm so happy! aww por aiden but now i can see why hes so braty all the time :D

OMG! this was a very insightful chap. and I saw the Dark Night also! it was awesome! please update soon!

Wow, a supremely revealing chapter. It's great to see another side of Aidan (or is it Aiden?) and see more of his past. Will is a great character; I'm anxiously awaiting too read how he and Aidan met. (If I'm not mistaken, they were an item once, yes?)

Thank you for taking my pushy criticism into consideration. As for the loss of your cousin, I feel the utmost sympathy for you. I hope things will start looking up for you soon.

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Hey girl hey.

:D

I'm so glad to get to see all these updates since I got back from my trip~ And Christian Bale Mother assaulter. Fing google it.

o very nice! Blaine is still being an ass I see! can't wait to see how he and Aiden will make up!

I'm really enjoying this story. However, I believe some aspects of the plot need to be pushed further.

I like that you've developed Blaine's character so much, as well as his family. Still, it would be nice to understand why Aidan is the way he is. Maybe a story from his teen years could shed some more light on this.

Also, I think that Victor's twin could use more development. He is mentioned in the story quite a lot, and I'm intrigued as to find out how he ended up with a "master", and if Victor might try to get him back. The character of Thomas is also understated. He seems to be a sort of calming influence for Will, but nothing else. He also could prove to be just as interesting a character as Blaine or Aidan.

Sorry if this critique sounds pushy, but the only reason I suggest these ideas is because I enjoy this story so much. I would love to see it go even further. You're an amazing writer with great ideas.

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wow its been so long since i reviewed

this chappter was really good, i luv leander ehehe

..."durama"? D:

PHAIL. IT'S "DORAMA". lulz. Nice chapter, so happy you updated~!

I'm so sorry about your family! And I know how you feel about finals, they suck. Just please update within the next month or two, your story is just too good to lose!

Yes, my red inking skills help people decipher your writing. Lol. I like this chapter. Maybe now that Victor has found a man (well, nim) he'll leave Aiden and Blaine alone to...*coughs*...you know, have talk time. Adult talk time. As in, write a sex scene. Lol.