Reviews for My Hands
Princess-anna57 chapter 1 . 10/6/2009
This is very beautiful, I really like it! Please write on!

~Anna~ _
The Breakdancing Ninja chapter 1 . 2/10/2007
[And I dont, I don't understand,] *don't.

[Its paper, paper thin,] *It's.

[I dont understand.] *don't.

I love the repetition of this poem; it's almost as if both pair of hands speak and echo the thoughts of the heart. This poem seems to touch on the theme of instinct, intiution, emotional sensibility through sensation. Often, in a movie, someone might say: "I don't know, I just having a feeling, that's all." The poem isn't clouded by motive or too much introspect; like real romance, the moment is undefined, but explained best through abstract concepts and sensory feelings.

Very nice!