Reviews for Her Lover
Solitary Fatalist chapter 1 . 10/23/2009
'been covered completly by clouds.' It should be completely.

'In death in can.' It should be it.

Those are minor mistakes though. I find the idea of the piece stirring, but I wonder. If the girl had killed herself as well, wouldn't it make the point of the story stronger?

That way, their love would last forever because their last memories of life on earth would be with each other.

I'm only suggesting though.. ]
InSilverShadows chapter 1 . 12/30/2007
I like the mix of poetry and prose. :)