|Reviews for Laughter|
| soliloquist chapter 1 . 2/13/2007
Hmm... s'ok I suppose, I mean in essence. You made a few spelling errors- cheerfull (cheerful) in the blurb, rout (route) and dub (dumb). Also her name is a little confusing, especially in the sentence 'Sam didn't know what he would do when the cable got cut'. Also 'The last thing she saw' is a bit cliched. I like the idea- a lot of guys seem like only so much dead weight. Perhaps we should rise up an annihilate them altogether... or just housetrain them...
| Blue Crusade chapter 1 . 2/11/2007
Hmm...that was pretty good. And very reflective on how boyfriends can be and the problems that everyday people suffer from. That was great. Keep writing! Although there was a lot of swearing. o.O I don't know, it's I just can't stand that much. Anyways great story. Ending was slightly depressing but great.