Loved how you just threw that Jake bit in there. Nice.

And, way to complicate things with the addition of Robbie. Could he be the one to catch Gabe's heart, perhaps? Hmm I think he just may be...

I'm glad I checked the site- it seems that FP's alerts are screwed up ONCE AGAIN. I do love Gabe oh so much

:) glad to see the update. I've been updating anf a lot of character seem to be popping up. :) i like it.

[squeals]

so...fucking...AWESOME! I love .

gah! please update soon! i can't wait!

I enjoyed it very much, thank you. :D

As always, looking forward to more.

LOL.I love it!It makes me smile and I hope you update very soon because I shall be waiting!:)

:)LOL. I like it!

yay! update, please!

Wow, that was great. ] I think you did an awesome job on everything. I particularly liked the part where Gabe said he thought he looked like Ryan Ross. XD I'm guessing that's who you meant?

Shameless smuttiness is right! Fun, though. I am a little surprised that Mr Armaan was fairly calm about the notion of one of his students being a prostitute. Wouldn't you be worried?

Anyway. Great chapter, really fun, and I can't wait for more.

Oh, yaoi. Love it. Anyway, I'm so glad Henri came back to Gabe! I was hoping they'd keep their little fling going. I just wonder how long they'll be able to keep it up before they begin to have feelings for one another? And what will the girls say if Gabe ends up leaving the corner for a customer, like the last twink?

Great addition. I can tell, I'm really going to like this story.

I thought Dominic would be gay.

But the teacher!

Woah.

Can't wait to see where this is going.

Aw Mr. Armaan

Heh, fun chapter. Favourite line was Gabe's "I glare at you with utter anger," and special love goes to the pink wallet.

With the sex scenes - I don't have much input, because I skim read them, but if you're worried, just read more porn. Practise makes perfect!

Also - ouch, he slept with his teacher? How uncomfortable. Although I take it Mr Armaan is going to be the love interest?

One critique there - if Mr Armaan is attractive as the girls say, why doesn't he just go to a club and pick up? Or is he shy?

Anyway, great chapter, hope you update soon.

So far, i like the story. The plot line is interesting and pretty unique. also, the characters are believeable/realistic. As for the sex scenes, numero uno, its rated M, and if someone can't handle it, they shouldn't be reading things with that rating. numero dos, if its in itallics, i think you're fine.

i await the next chapter :)