I really like this story so far. It's really well written, easy to understand, and I admire Adi. She'd be an awesome big sister. ] As for the sex scenes, I think you did fine. I say keep 'em. If people are daring enough to read an M rated fanfiction they should also be willing to accept what it includes.

oh i like this story ...

interesting characters especially Adi

i wonder when Mr. Armaan finds out about Gabe soOn i hope

plz update

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Um.. why would you cut the scenes out? Personally, I thought they added a lot to the story of Mr. Armaan's and Gabe's past. Besides, they weren't bad at all. I don't know where you got that idea from. Anyway, my suggestion is to keep them. The story is rated M for this reason- if people wanted a story completely devoid of sex, they'd look for another rating.

It's up to you, but I think removing the sex scenes would take a lot away from the story overall. Risk it if you must!

Cheers to the rest, though. I would never have guessed that one of Gabe's teachers would be one of his former tricks. I can't wait for Armaan's reaction when he figures out where he knows gabe from. I'm just a little disappointed that he didn't recognize him right away- was the sex not memorable? I don't want to think of him as a guy who cruises the streets for anonymous sex every single night.. but then again, I know nothing about his character as of yet. ;) Update soon!

La la la la.

I mean, you probably can't go wrong writing a story named for a Shins song. It's nearly impossible.

Anyway, great start! Can't wait for more from Gabe!

I like this story, once I've glossed over the relative unlikelihood of a prostitute with an altruistic streak as wide as Adi's. Gabe's such a fun, fumbling character... And I vaguely think Adi should have pushed harder to get him off the streets, but whatever.

Anyway! Fun chapter, Adi's whirlwind character is an interesting one, so I'm almost sad that she isn't going to dominate. I look forward to a combination of high school story and dark story, and I hope you update soon!

I comepletely love it.

Hey,

I am SO SORRY, I would've reviewed 'The Interview' but somehow, my PC wouldn't let me everytime I tried which I hated. Sorry!

Anywho, I think it should be okay on this story, at least I hope so.

A great start! Very different from what other people would usually start out like. A very nice story beginning. I can't wait to see where this is going to go! Uhm, don't know what else I can say, please continue and update soon!

- Tears of Autumn -

Oddly interesting story :)

Ohh, I like it! D I like Adi. She's so blunt, it's great. XD; And Gabe's adorable. Update this son, I'll be watching!