PSSSSH, I just had a major fangirling moment when I noticed the 'From: '

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Sooo sweet.

Okay, now that that is over: beautiful story, really! I love thinking of Gabe as 'lowly in the rank of society' then being all businessman-like. I'm glad that you had Andy and Henri get together (even though they broke up) because that is so adorable / ships them.

Woah. WOAH. Amy and Ira, huh? Amy flirting, woah. I am saying 'woah' too much.

Well, unfortunately, I'm a pretty lazy reviewer as I want to go from one story to the next as quickly as I can or chapter to chapter, so I can keep them horrific giggles of mine going as I think of them all, so most times I sum my feelings and thoughts in the end/latest chapter. WHICH IS BAD. BECAUSE THEN YOU GET ONE REVIEW INSTEAD OF AMOUNT OF CHAPTERS (16 in your case). Maybe I should just say: 'I love this chapter' each time. YES, I'LL DO THAT FROM NOW ON.
Thanks.

Bye...
:)

Hey! I think your story well written and I love it but the only character that I found myself strongly disliking was Robbie. It feels like he's got no back bone and no endearing qualities besides being bunny-cute. The 'happy-ending' was thus a tad dissapointing, LOL. But, the English teacher was just WOW...I've got no words.

I started reading this a week ago and read whenever I had time. Finally finished, and I loved it!(: Very nice plot and I adore the characters.

XOXO

Lexi

Liked it.

I know your lying about the whole I didn't mean for this to happen. lol. It was like the entire chapter. You so meant for it to happen that way.

Poor Gabe. All he wanted was to make money and now guys are falling for him left and right.

oh wow. this was extremely dramatic and i loved it :D

YAY SHAMELESS SMUTTINESS! :D This is easily becoming my fav story ever...EVER.

keep the scenes! love em! and Mr...Armaan. xD

LOL. I LOVE SIN CITY. And did you really use a quote from the Incredibles in a story about a prostitute? *dies laughing* I'll never be able to watch that movie with my little cousins again. xD

So is the sequel started yet? Hey, it's been three years, I have a right to hassle.

Typo/glitch alert:

" She rubbed his back comfortingly, eyes kind. "I think you have to let this one go, Gabe. Neither of you is ready for such a commitment."

"What do you mean?"

"I mean that you're young. Besides, if you got in a relationship, it would be strained." She rubbed his back comfortingly, eyes kind. "I think you have to let this one go, Gabe. Neither of you is ready for such a commitment."

"What do you mean?"

"I mean that you're young. Besides, if you got in a relationship, it would be strained by your obligations and his insecurities. If it's meant to be, you'll find each other one day and you'll be ready for the relationship." Adi kissed his cheek. "Now go. It'll only get harder the longer you wait."

Aww cute... I LIKED ANDY! Anyway, awesome story. I liked them only becomming serious later on - so much more realistic (relationship wise). My fav characters were definatley Adi, Regina, Andy and Armaan - too cool! :D

i read this today, good story. I like what you do to Gabe and Robbie, that they come back together later. They are more mature now. I want Ady to be my big sister too...can I?

You have some edit to do however.

chapter 5 : the live journal entry start at the date Friday, September 15, 2005

chapter 7 : Sunday, September 17, 2006

chapter 8 : Saturday, October 7, 2007

chapter 9 : Thursday, October 19, 2007 (logic with ch.8)

chapter 2 : you write this about the cell : The slim black phone vibrated in his hand, singing the Barbie Girl song annoying

chapter 4 : you write : A pink Razr?" Henri asked, raising an eyebrow.

Chapter 3 : "I'm glad you pay such close attention to what I say," Adi said sarcastically, unlocking the door. "Why do you need the computer?". "I have a livejournal," Gabe muttered.

Chapter 5 : "You use livejournal?" Adi asked in surprise, leaning against the door to her room, watching as Gabe exited from the site. "That's why you wanted to use my computer?"

Chapter 12 : in the middle, you repeat a sentence twice : "I think you have to let this one go, Gabe. Neither of you is ready for such a commitment." "What do you mean?" "I mean that you're young. Besides, if you got in a relationship, it would be strained." She rubbed his back comfortingly, eyes kind. "I think you have to let this one go, Gabe. Neither of you is ready for such a commitment." "What do you mean?" "I mean that you're young. Besides, if you got in a relationship, it would be strained….

Gwen

awesome story! i couldn't stop reading it!