Reviews for A Maid's Tale |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I just loved this story. You are an amazing wrighter and this is an amazing story. Keep up the good work and wright more soon. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I find it weird how cassie was asking how he always found her when she was looking to go back to him in the first place! You asked for it by running away! Ugh sry for the rant Haha |
![]() ![]() its unlikely that she could (want) to move her arms if her shoulder blade was hurt. The skin of that area stretches- making the wound very painful. You need to think these things over to make a story believable. Just a tip :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() WOW SIMPLY AWESOME ! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Okay well umm great story! Really detailed.. I got a little lost but found my way back. Did you know that Lord Du Mort means Lord of the dead in french? Yeah coincidence or not? |
![]() ![]() Love your characters. So well explained. |
![]() ![]() I KNEW IT! HE IS A WEREWOLF. |
![]() ![]() ARIMAS IS A WEREWOLF! |
![]() ![]() ![]() OMG ! i am in love with this chapter ! |
![]() ![]() Just a heads up... You're trying way too hard to describe things therefore making your sentences really, really long and boring. |
![]() ![]() amazing story. love that there is some happiness for all the characters...just curious is that really the ending? ur story info says complete but that doesnt seem like an ending to me. so just wondering where ur going with this. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow! Such a lovely story! I'm glad everybodys happy_ x |
![]() ![]() this is a really good story can you get the next chapter soon |
![]() ![]() ![]() well this said it was completed I dont know how it could stop but it was very confucing at first but i like it because she got to be with the one she loved |