Reviews for A Maid's Tale
Unknown Sorrow chapter 50 . 9/26/2009
Oh my God! I loved that story! Please tell me you've finished the sequel...? Anyway, I'll definitely be around... Awesome story!

Unknown Sorrow chapter 7 . 9/24/2009
So I would have reviewed one of your earlier chapters, but I got caught up in the story-and my school schedule really sucks so I don't have time to review if I really want to get all 50 of these chapters read! Anyway, here I am... I love it! The story so far is great! You've gotten me hooked...! So much for my homework...

One recommendation though, have someone proofread your chapters for you. It always helps to have someone else read them after you write them. No, no story is ever perfect, but they can be near perfect and this one does have some grammatical errors...

Anyway, I'll be checking in later! Keep writing cause I'm sure your other writings are just as good as this one!

Hermy chapter 29 . 8/19/2009
Damn! I'm still on chapter 29 and I'm browsing the review section just to get some SPOILERS around here! _
Kanshisha no Yume chapter 51 . 4/7/2009
It's not bad, but I've noticed a steady decline in your descriptions since the beginning. At first, you had flushed out, descriptive paragraphs that really gave me a good idea of what was going on. Then, as the story progresses, you seemed to fall into the habit of writing short, brief paragraphs and lots of dialogue. It seems that the further into the story you get, the more rushed you feel to complete it. Either way, it is a good story, but remember to give lush descriptions to really immerse the reader in your world!
Elyera Myst chapter 51 . 1/29/2009
What happened to this story? It was absolutely awesome. I want to know what happens.
Fallen4ever chapter 29 . 12/26/2008
ginabella59 chapter 51 . 10/7/2008
I just fisnished to read your story and want to say ty for enjoyed my day, this was a beautiful story.
Eccthlacine chapter 51 . 10/6/2008
great story! a bit long, seemed to go on and on with the leaving and comming back and such. Glad that it finally came together and that Cassie wasn't sadistic enough to remain with Alexander. I think it could've ended at the chapter where he kisses Mona; it seems like a good way to tie up all lose ends. Loved the story!
MaskedNightingale chapter 51 . 10/1/2008
So that's how the whole "pet" thing started.

And its the end.

Oh I just wanted to apologize for my really short reviews the last times, I was doing like three times at the same time then so I only did small reviews.


This was a really neat story. Original, you did not do the same "I'll never forgive you, wait no, I love you passionately" story so good for you.
MaskedNightingale chapter 50 . 10/1/2008
I thought he said that the first time I read it and then I realized it was her and a big smile spread across my face.
MaskedNightingale chapter 49 . 10/1/2008
Yep, Mona is a good change for him.
MaskedNightingale chapter 46 . 9/30/2008
Maybe Ale. will have a happy ending after all.
MaskedNightingale chapter 43 . 9/30/2008
Sheesh this girl gets terribly hurt like every chapter, I'm surprised she hasn't keeled over yet.
MaskedNightingale chapter 42 . 9/30/2008
Despite myself I feel sorry for Alexander.
MaskedNightingale chapter 34 . 9/30/2008
This little snippets really show why Alex. became the way he was.
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