I love the first Ch. :)

Ok... it seems as though Christina and Jo are cousins yet Christina is having his baby?

A bit contradictory if you said she was straight in the character profiles... Or maybe that's to show us nothing will occur with Ms. Roebek? I actually have a teensy crush on Peter, and don't want him hurt...

Oh wow. Loving This story. Incest... Fucked up teens. And now we have an older guy (Jay) with a younger kid (Gavin)? Dream come trueeeee, so many dynamics.

It'd be fun if Ben was totally in love with either Aiden or Alex. I want me some drama! I just adored the ending remark - "yada yada yada, that was for sure." So whimsical and clever! It's just so startling true. P

Lol. They characters are all just so cute. I love the addition of the incestuous siblings. I hope they're more prominently addressed in later chapters. I'm liking this hesitation they both have with each other, since it's so adorable, but sometimes I just want to scream at them... Having the same first letter in their names is quite annoying. I have to actually "think" to discern the difference between the characters. Imo, Aiden/Adrian/Alex etc are used wayyy too much.

Wow, I loved this story.. the true love btwn characters... have you written the sequel to Aiden and Alexs story? What's your lj account!

Good luck with any/all publishing!

what! WHAT! WWHAT! JAYDEN DONT PLEASE! D: What happened to poor Gavin!

Oh my god I ADORED this story! Loved the pairings and the plot. You definitely made Glenn very hateable- God I hate homophobes. Anyway- can't wait to read more of your writing!

okie, I'll add you when I'm next on there. I'm invitationtosin.

lol DAMNIT now i have to remember my livejournal account? lol i'll check if i have one already and if i don't i'll get one. I'll look forward to reading more of Gavin and Jayden's story. Thank you, tho, for the fantastic story that you've provided so far.

thats unfair cos i dont want to have to sign up to another site just to read your stories that you could just put up here.

and its a good story too

No!

Aiden and Alex are the best! They're the heart of this story!

BTW If I want any news I have to add you at LJ to my friends?

OMG I don't even know if my LJ is still alive!

Are you still going to post the rest of SS on FP or not? No offence but livejournal really annoys me (I like yours but that's only because of a certain guy on the mood pics *drool*). I don't mean to be annoying but please anwer the question.

OMG THIS IS SO AWESOME! I LOVED THE CAPTURE ME GENTLY STORY! I LOVED JAYDEN AND GAVIN THE MOST! I LOVED ALL OF THEM! BUT HOW BOUT CHRIS AND JO? PLEASE UPDATE THIS SEQUEL I WANNA SEE WHAT'S HAPPENED! PLEASE! I LOVE THIS THANK YOU SO MUCH!

YOU'RE AWESOME AND WONDERFUL!

luv&hugs,

H-BGP