Reviews for Six Weeks With Satan
Inkpress00 chapter 20 . 6/19/2011
Ah, I love this story. You should try getting it published, I will be the first to buy it when it goes to print. :)

I honestly can't remember how many times I've read this, but every time, I pick up on something different. For example, in some earlier chapter, Kurt uses the idiom, "Don't look a gift horse in the mouth" and Lotte is fairly confused by this. If she had been in the states since she was seven and by extension knew and spoke English from then on and possibly a little before, she should have known what that meant.

In truth, though, that's the only thing that bothers me about this whole thing.

Your character development is absolutely perfect and you have just the right amount of details to make it fleshed out and believable without being over-the-top and way too much information.

I worship the ground you walk on and you are a god(dess).

-Inky
Remi chapter 8 . 6/17/2011
Wow. So apparently Lotte seems to be musically/ artistically/ literaturely inclined AND have hot German dudes fallIng for her yet she seems to not take the anvil sized hints. Jeez, im really frustrated right now. Hell she even SAW the look on his face yet she didn't even think that he might like her. I mean really! Even if they fought nonstop for 11 years, wouldn't it at least cross her mind that he might like her? Especially since she watched all those gushy chick flicks? Or is she just naturally dense? Gawd, I'm like simmering with annoyance right now.
everyoneisMISunderstood chapter 20 . 6/17/2011
I haven't reviewed yet (but I've been lurking) and it's about time I write some well-earned praise. Now, I know this story is long over and you probably won't even feel the need to reply to this (but if you did, I'd probably feel super special because I'm a creeper who loves talking to people...) So anyone, I'd like to say that compared to some of the stuff I've read on this site, this is amazing. And not being compared to the stuff on this site...

This is still AMAZING. Really and truly.

1. I really enjoyed many things, obviously. I think the setting was really interesting, made me feel like I was going on a tour through Europe! And I adore Lotte and Kurt's relationship - it progressed perfectly and believably. Man, it's so hard to choose my favorite thing though. I'm sorry I'm rambling so badly.

2. The only thing for me that I found slightly off putting (emphasis on the slightly) was when you didn't put a translation for certain Italian endearments because I really didn't feel like looking them up because I'm a total bum. Not your fault, mine.

3. All your characters were absolutely incredible.

Eden - THANK YOU. Finally, a character who's Christian that doesn't put as all to shame. And thank you so much for not treating us with condesceincion. I don't know if you are Christian, but Eden marks a truly wonderful Christian that I aspire to be like. Thank you for putting us out there like that because most "Christians" in stories are based on Christians that don't act very Christ-like at all. Really - I just can't say thank you enough. .

Lotte - A girl with backbone and spice but still good at heart. Awesome!

Kurt - What a sweetie. The Paris thing was just... gah. The way he treated Lotte too, just enough sappiness without going totally overnboard, was absolutely perfect for my tastes.

Bryce - I NEED HIM. He... oh my. I want a Bryce in my life! Seriously, he's so adorkable.

Least favorite: I can't really say I had a least favorite. But I'd say Jane is the least relatable to me, so I guess her? Which is funny, actually, because we're both Taiwanese.

4. If you said I had a beautiful body, I'd wink and say you too! (Actually, I probably would ina a joking manner. Because I'm a loser like that.)
Binkybaby chapter 20 . 6/13/2011
I loved it. lol.
i-wish-i-had-wings chapter 20 . 6/1/2011
aww, this story was just so fluffy and cute ) you seem to know a lot about europe but i can't seem to figure out which country you're from? lol, anyways, really good story and i hope that bryce will find someone 3
Nica chapter 20 . 5/14/2011
This is so sweet! Thumbs up for the story! Kurt is just so sweet. He actually waited for 11 years for this girl and it was just breathtakingly sweet :') You're an awesome author by the way :)
little.artist chapter 20 . 4/23/2011
Beautiful story :D I've never actually read a fictionpress story with the main character being anything besides American...really interesting and new :) Great job!
Princess Mariana chapter 20 . 4/13/2011
Awesome and so sweet! I love how all the characters developed into almost real people and stuff. :)
Brown-Eyed Chocoholic chapter 3 . 4/13/2011
Kurt seems to have a crush on a certain girl whom he makes fun of often. ;)
Princess Mariana chapter 16 . 4/12/2011
so she meets some stranger and she agrees to go on a date with him, alone...that's an unwise plan.
Princess Mariana chapter 15 . 4/12/2011
I love her roommates. jane is especially hilarious.
Princess Mariana chapter 14 . 4/12/2011
Kurt is officially AWESOME!
Princess Mariana chapter 10 . 4/11/2011
He ate Grasshoppers! hillarious!
PotOfGoldXxx chapter 6 . 4/1/2011
Imma happy:) I got my wish
PotOfGoldXxx chapter 5 . 4/1/2011
The one thing I'd like you to improve in this story - even though I know it's pointless saying so cos it's already finished- is how horrid Kurt is to Lotte. And obviously my favourate (sp?) character is Lotte
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