Reviews for The Perfect Flaw
Mirabella chapter 1 . 11/22/2009

Loved the flow of this, and the imagery.

Strong ending. :)

Two thumbs up!
letyoursoultakeflight chapter 1 . 11/21/2009
I am really getting into your poetry (or songs?) at the moment! I love the imagery within them ]
Emily Cherie chapter 1 . 11/10/2008
Your words are extacy.
ruledbythenpen-crimsonrunsthru chapter 1 . 3/8/2007
Yet another masterpiece! I have to admit, your pieces get me quite drunk, and massively disoriented with their extreme depth...I feel I should be in a writer's AA focus group or something after reading.
xo Secrets chapter 1 . 2/13/2007

That's All I Really Have To Say... Wow.

I Love The Lines "There's something thin and frail/flowing through the vein./She's pooling into droplets/just atop your vinyl skin." Absolutely Superb Imagery. Your Lyrics Really Are Artistic & Individual; I Really Enjoyed This Piece. _

Lots Of Love & Best Wishes

~ xo Secrets
The Silent Wickerman chapter 1 . 2/12/2007
great poem. I really liked the second last stanza.
fishslappinghighlandflinger chapter 1 . 2/12/2007
This is a good song. I love the imagery you created. Keep writing!

~Stan the nerd