|Reviews for The Perfect Flaw|
| Mirabella chapter 1 . 11/22/2009
Loved the flow of this, and the imagery.
Strong ending. :)
Two thumbs up!
| letyoursoultakeflight chapter 1 . 11/21/2009
I am really getting into your poetry (or songs?) at the moment! I love the imagery within them ]
| Emily Cherie chapter 1 . 11/10/2008
Your words are extacy.
| ruledbythenpen-crimsonrunsthru chapter 1 . 3/8/2007
Yet another masterpiece! I have to admit, your pieces get me quite drunk, and massively disoriented with their extreme depth...I feel I should be in a writer's AA focus group or something after reading.
| xo Secrets chapter 1 . 2/13/2007
That's All I Really Have To Say... Wow.
I Love The Lines "There's something thin and frail/flowing through the vein./She's pooling into droplets/just atop your vinyl skin." Absolutely Superb Imagery. Your Lyrics Really Are Artistic & Individual; I Really Enjoyed This Piece. _
Lots Of Love & Best Wishes
| The Silent Wickerman chapter 1 . 2/12/2007
great poem. I really liked the second last stanza.
| fishslappinghighlandflinger chapter 1 . 2/12/2007
This is a good song. I love the imagery you created. Keep writing!
Stan the nerd