Reviews for Paint Your Dreams
DarkBlysse chapter 1 . 6/13/2007
The rhyming is spot-on and I just adore the last two lines.
OutsidetheSqare chapter 1 . 5/18/2007
Thanks for your kind words. I liked this poem- it's well written and has a nice feel to it.
sharks don't sleep chapter 1 . 5/15/2007
Wow, this is so pretty! I love that you kept it short but it doesn't seem like anything was left out. Wonderful.

Beluga1 chapter 1 . 5/8/2007
I'm adding you to my Favorite Authors list! ;)
The Reverse Edge Blade chapter 1 . 5/2/2007
I loved it! This'll go in my favorites! Your rhyming was so good, and your shortness was too!

You're a great writer!

The Reverse Edge Blade
Anaare chapter 1 . 4/5/2007
A lovely poem, indeed. I enjoyed reading this, a simple yet elegant poem, with a wonderful message. Well done!

My thanks for the review. Greatly appreciated.
Ashelin chapter 1 . 3/22/2007
This was so beautiful. It just flowed so well and everything seemed to fit perfectly.

Thank you so much for your reviews. It's people like you who make me write more. :]
smile for the sunshine chapter 1 . 3/17/2007
This is really beautiful too. It paints a picture in my mind. I love poetry that does that.
End-of-forever chapter 1 . 3/15/2007
Oh. I like this very much. I think the best four lines are the best, but it's all lovely. :-)
Amari chapter 1 . 3/12/2007
*googly eyes* OOH...I love this one! Great job! I would keep this one the same, but perhaps go along the same lines for another poem. You write beautiful poetry, luv, and are very gifted.

With utmost sincerety,

remaining Amari
TragicDreams chapter 1 . 3/10/2007
I love this because after all these years I still don't understand you so it makes perfect sense! Love ya! Keep writing!
Femaleking chapter 1 . 3/9/2007
Wow, I really love this. Short but incredibly striking. As soon as I finished reading it I wanted to re-read it! XD I love the vocabularly you've used. It's brilliantly worded - something that all short poems need to be in order to be effective. The rhymes flow so well. I'm adding this to my favourites
antigonelives chapter 1 . 2/24/2007
Ah, lovely poem. Short and sweet, me like. :)
MarvellousMarvin chapter 1 . 2/24/2007
i really like this image, its a really nice poem, and i think that its shortness works well.

thanks for the reveiw!
Arafax chapter 1 . 2/23/2007
Interesting concept... It made me smile as I read it. Nice job.
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