Reviews for He's a Beach
AllyCred chapter 1 . 3/17/2007
'The currents are rising, the sky turns to black.

The map in my eyes reads "Never look back."' - Favourite part in the whole poem.

The rhyming scheme is on point and i love the way it doesn't feel forced. The imagery is very vivid and the choice of words, reads quite eloquently.

It's extremely hard getting over people that hurt, i know exactly what that's like.

Well done, i love this poem!

Lotsa Love

AC
CHIIJOY chapter 1 . 2/14/2007
"to fill me with thirst that's quenched with the need..."

Loved that line. Been there before so it's relate-able and sharp. Good job. :D