Reviews for Heartstrings
deo.volente chapter 1 . 9/19/2007
It's beautiful.
lovelaced chapter 1 . 5/24/2007
That was beautifully written. The imagery was very good too. Great job!

Hustle Rose chapter 1 . 5/5/2007
Amazing, I've honestly never read anything that so well describes being completely in love with someone.
PM20 chapter 1 . 3/12/2007
I get this picture of my head of two people intertwined, but with veins and a bloody tissue. I love the last line, like you want to surgically remove this lover from you life.
Grayhome chapter 1 . 3/11/2007
I think the tone's a little dark for the subject. I mean, describing love as a violent act CAN be very effective, but the effectiveness depends on the fact that the emotion does not take a backseat to the violence. Because if the violence is driving the poem, then it seems not about love at all, and the purpose of the poem becomes unclear.
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 3/9/2007
interesting... the begining was so sweet in an odd way, but the part then the tone changed... powerful and beautifully described... awesome metaphor
a silenced revolution chapter 1 . 2/26/2007
Quite well written. The ending was humorous to me. Good work.
magnusthewolf chapter 1 . 2/17/2007
very nicely done. i loved the tone and feel throught this piece. great descriptions and vivid imagery and it kept me interested to continue reading on (which is rare for me) lol ;) great job! magnus
The Black Rider chapter 1 . 2/14/2007
In other words, "Somebody's whipped!"

Just kidding. It's very good, great imagery.