|Reviews for Symbolic?|
| sk8rgrl chapter 1 . 2/24/2007
Yup! Very symbolic indeed! Or at least I think so. Like, in the beginning, maybe it's representative of a seemingly good/happy childhood (I say seeming because you are alone, like maybe it was fine while you lived it but looking back you realize something was missing? idk) and then someone pulled the rug out from under your feet, as it were. So then the second part is where you are now, lost in a dark pit. I love the connection between the swing in both sections, how it's freeing and pleasant in the first, and then upseting and sickening in the second. Maybe something you thought was good has turned bad? Oh, but I love the ending, with the rain washing everything a different color. Very nice. Very visual in your descriptions. Good job!