|Reviews for God's Hand|
| Kaira the Kitsune chapter 1 . 6/6/2007
Yatta! I finally found you! The link wouldn't work and neither would the fictionpress search engine. So I just typed out the link with the pen name in it, and it worked!
Very nice story! Now I'm off to read the other.
| Kayi Rowling chapter 1 . 2/22/2007
As I had already told you, I liked your story a lot!
And congrats. for the EXCELLENT grade you obtained for it!
| C. Fitzsimmons chapter 1 . 2/15/2007
I would remove the numbered notes in the context of the story. They're a little awkward when you come upon them. Having the notes at the end to explain what the terms mean is fine, but in context, the reference numbers just detract from the flow of the story. Simple story, but nice. I like the narrator's thoughts, simple but effective.