|Reviews for take my hand|
| Ashlee Pond chapter 1 . 4/4/2008
It's so bittersweet.
So easy to relate to.
That's all I can say.
| A Sweet Escape chapter 1 . 6/3/2007
that was amazing! It reminded me of this AMAZING book i read called Wildwood Dancing and i highly recommend it! You also remind me of that poet dude (his name escapes me right now) who only capitalized some stuff in his poems. Pretty cool stuff! Good job!
| Katie Lee chapter 1 . 5/15/2007
i like this, its one of my favorites
| whispered something profound chapter 1 . 5/7/2007
really pretty *adds author to favorites*
| laughter at the funeral chapter 1 . 4/17/2007
wow, i love how you capitalized "so"...and those last lines were so hearfelt..."all i wanted us was to be happy"...you did such a good job...
| fairytale failure chapter 1 . 4/7/2007
The format works really well with the light, floaty feel in this poem. In the last three lines it becomes a bit deeper, and gives he reader something to think about. Great poem.
| a silenced revolution chapter 1 . 3/28/2007
Lovely imagery. I like this. Good work. Keep it up!
| Frog Tongue chapter 1 . 3/23/2007
wow... very, very nice imagry
| Anna Christie chapter 1 . 2/26/2007
Deep! I like this one!
| The angel of Alma chapter 1 . 2/17/2007
I really like this a lot.
(And don't take me lightly. It's the only thing I've reviewed all night.)
| Sworn Destiny chapter 1 . 2/15/2007
I like how the ending is so strong in one line that it changes the mood of the entire poem. There's a lot of very good word choice that strengthens the poem, and you chose good areas to format the words.