Reviews for take my hand
Ashlee Pond chapter 1 . 4/4/2008

It's so bittersweet.

So easy to relate to.


You're amazing.

That's all I can say.
A Sweet Escape chapter 1 . 6/3/2007
that was amazing! It reminded me of this AMAZING book i read called Wildwood Dancing and i highly recommend it! You also remind me of that poet dude (his name escapes me right now) who only capitalized some stuff in his poems. Pretty cool stuff! Good job!

Katie Lee chapter 1 . 5/15/2007
i like this, its one of my favorites
whispered something profound chapter 1 . 5/7/2007
really pretty *adds author to favorites*
laughter at the funeral chapter 1 . 4/17/2007
wow, i love how you capitalized "so"...and those last lines were so hearfelt..."all i wanted us was to be happy" did such a good job...

truly yours...
fairytale failure chapter 1 . 4/7/2007
The format works really well with the light, floaty feel in this poem. In the last three lines it becomes a bit deeper, and gives he reader something to think about. Great poem.
a silenced revolution chapter 1 . 3/28/2007
Lovely imagery. I like this. Good work. Keep it up!
Frog Tongue chapter 1 . 3/23/2007
wow... very, very nice imagry
Anna Christie chapter 1 . 2/26/2007
Deep! I like this one!

~Anna Christie~
The angel of Alma chapter 1 . 2/17/2007
I really like this a lot.

(And don't take me lightly. It's the only thing I've reviewed all night.)

Good job.
Sworn Destiny chapter 1 . 2/15/2007
I like how the ending is so strong in one line that it changes the mood of the entire poem. There's a lot of very good word choice that strengthens the poem, and you chose good areas to format the words.

Great job.