Reviews for i'm prettier on my knees
Apathy International chapter 1 . 4/30/2007
excellently done. i'm beginning to think that i like your work.

i'd love it if you review mine.
Idiot Pilot chapter 1 . 2/26/2007
The ending is fabulous. Good work, as usual. The imagery was definitely strong and...wow.
Wylloa chapter 1 . 2/24/2007
your words are a knife on my flesh. A morbid yet unforgetable beauty.
lackluster chapter 1 . 2/22/2007
the ending killed me. my favorite line, no doubt. but then again, so is the rest of the poem.
no.peace.los.angeles chapter 1 . 2/18/2007
I love the way this starts and ends. Those two lines just completely blew my mind. There are parts in the middle I'm not so sure about ("too-short nails" & "shaky bricks in your wall," to be specific), but in general, I really liked this. The title is also achingly perfect. Keep writing! :)
riotmaker chapter 1 . 2/17/2007
i fucking love this. especially the first stanza.

your words have so much power it's unbelievable.
InxUtterxSilence chapter 1 . 2/17/2007
hands down to those beautiful disasters
x account closed x chapter 1 . 2/16/2007
this is... a monday morning and you can't remeber anything about the weekend.. i dunno. harrowing maybe? it's just heartbreak and angony and torment. wraped up in a pretty pretty package of words. you take my words, my breathe, everything with these things hun. you amaze me, because you're amazing.

iloveyou
dollface and her cancer chapter 1 . 2/16/2007
&& that last line is what tears you apart in just the right way. it makes the rest of the poem resonate so much more.
Trinity Spark chapter 1 . 2/16/2007
Wow. Very good work.

/you wear me like a complex./ Loved it.