Reviews for My Lot
rodwenfefalas chapter 1 . 4/17/2007
Oh, I love it! I believe many people would agree heartedly with this! I like how the rhythm works on and off here; how you gave a vague hint at what you're talking about, yet it explains everything! If there's an underlying meaning, I'm afraid I haven't found it, but that's lack of care on my part, not yours. I applaud you!
Nokturnal Augury chapter 1 . 2/16/2007
Very well put together, though that one last sentence sticks out like a sore thumb.

I personally like that sore thumb (it ties back to the 1st line AND the title - and I just like things that are different - and it serves as to jolt you right at the very end of the poem, leaving an impression) but that might just be me.