Reviews for Strawberry Punk |
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![]() ![]() ![]() When would you continue writing this is really good. |
![]() ![]() ![]() what the HELL is a strawberry punk, and why is it so serious? i mean come on, youre going to jump somebody because they wear colored punk clothes? anyway good job, you got me thinking. |
![]() ![]() Those aren't links... HOW AM I SUPPOSED TO SEE THE PICTURES? D: Why do they start with .com? |
![]() ![]() ![]() I (obviously) haven't finished reading what you have of this story yet, but I made the decision to review and give my opinion from simply the first chapter before I forgot completely. Well, to start off, I love the invention and use of the strawberry punk. First because when you view punks they're always guys unless they were part of the grl movement. No one really counts a girl as a punk really. I love the fact that a strawberry punk could essentially be like a normal one, but with an altered sense of fashion and a different attitude. Frankly, all you need to truly be a punk a little is to hold the beliefs, fashion could just be an added bonus. Also, with the strawberry punk it ,in a way, represents the submission in culture how some people are brought down from something silly. However, when I first read strawberry punk I was either guessing the correct thing, or a japanese punk. Through all of the things that I like about your story, so far I have found only one real objection and that is that you are portraying all of the "real/true" punks as violent little buggers. Though this is the understood stereotype it can be assured that not everyone will be like that. And I never quite heard of a "gang" of punks, it seems more of a gangster thing to me. Sorry that was so long! I do truly enjoy what I've read so far! |
![]() ![]() hey i loved all the things, i just read all them in the space of like ten seconds cuz they're so awesome. but the links arnt working on my computer! so i dont know what they look like *sobs* ilove the Strawberry Punk aspect, and btw was that Cancer by MCR Void was listening to? luv the stories *gives strawberry* (just a suggestion listen to Strawberry Gashes by Jack Off Jill, you might like it...kinda...) plz update :P |
![]() ![]() ![]() Your story and plotline is so interesting and fun to read. I can only hope the updates and new. Chapters come quicker:)) I love you guys' story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() hope you update soon |
![]() ![]() ![]() great story so question, Is whats his name dieing? If so what from? Please say in the next couple of chapters. Anywho update soon,toodels. |
![]() ![]() ![]() wo love it so much! I want to glomp Void _ Update soon please! xox |
![]() ![]() ![]() i love this story! keep it up! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really Like this story, it's highly entertaining and the plot is interesting and complex so well done, please update soon |
![]() ![]() ![]() I loved this chapter, it was amazing like all the others... update soon? please? *bats eyelashes* |
![]() ![]() ![]() hiya, very very very cool! i hope the next chapter comes soon! btw when are they ever going to get together? its taking ages! :P |
![]() ![]() ![]() Loved it. Cant wait for the next part. I love this story so much! |
![]() ![]() ![]() oh my god i like this story, i mea sometimes i am not a hundred percent sure about things, because yeah i dont know anyone like that, but i like it. so please keep it coming. |