Reviews for The Tutoring Contract |
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![]() ![]() omg you have to atleast finish maybe one more chapter please... There are so many ways you can improve this story and i mean it been like 2 or 3 years since you've updated last i'm sure you should have some time now :3 please... but then i guess thanks for the story its so hard to find one that you can actually read past the first chapter :) gookluck on your worky work stuff |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was an AWESOME chapter! I liked Wes especially, but I still liked Trent! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON! |
![]() ![]() ![]() i HATE you from the bottom of my guts for leaving all ur fans and readers in this... this... ARGHGGH! how can u DO THIS? WHAT IS WRONG WITH YOU! you are so mean... i've read ur profile: UR NEVER COMING BACK. NO i hate u for keeping us in such suspense and not even having the decency of finishing such an amazing story! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I not only wish for you to finish this story (pretty please?) But I really, REALLY want to know what the secret message is supposed to be, the bold and underlined letters... I have "Wes is like the gre" AND THAT'S IT. Man, I felt so brilliant noticing them... I'm probably not the only one though... Please keep going, you're fantastic! |
![]() ![]() ![]() this is a really good story please update cant wait so please update! |
![]() ![]() I read this a year ago and have rekindled my love for it at 2am this morning :D You cannot believe how happy I was to find this again. You have awesomely fleshed out characters, great plotline and squeeable romance that makes this fic so fantastic to read :) My only criticim is that I felt that Amy and Wes' relationship went a little too fast, but that may just be me :P Anyway, I was kind of disappointed that you hadn't updated for around two years and that you seem to have all but given up on it but I really really hope you can continue this and will update soon (at least for my sanity!) :) It'd be a shame not to. Thanks for the lovely read, regardless! |
![]() ![]() :D This is the most amazing story EVER! I love the way it has developed and Wes and Amy's personalities, the amount of history and love they have with/for each other. I really really really hope you update sometime X) I've sort of needed your story to keep me going these past few days...it's almost like a caffeine addiction! :O ;) Anyho I'm off to cyberstalk you now, to check if you've written any other wonderful stories. Don't be creeped out or anything. I kid, I kid :D You are an fantastic writer and I hope you continue to add chapters to this story! |
![]() ![]() This story is absolutely amazing. I couldn't stop reading it, and trust me that's a good thing for you. I got scolded by my parents for not doing my chores because of your story :P I hope you continue this. i know you're really busy, but its sad to know that a wonderful story is not going to be finished :D Good Luck! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I just spent most of my night reading this story. I love it. It is a bit sad that you're probably not going to continue it, but I respect that. However, I just have one request. Could you at least tell me what you've been spelling out with underlined and bolded letters of the first sentences of each chapter? I've noticed it since the second chapter. "Wes is like the gre-" what? I'm so curious about that! haha. And you just reminded me how much I loved watching gilmore girls. Anyways, I hope you haven't completely stopped writing. You definitely have a gift for it. And I must say that I love the bit of realism you've incorporated into the story. Well, actually, just with Amy and how she's a walking contradiction. Oh, and with Wes and his mood swings too. I guess I can just really relate to their personalities. Thanks for sharing your story. I really enjoyed reading it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hi! I just read this story for like an hour straight and I am SO in love with it! They are the cutest couple ever :) I admit that the reason I was attracted to this story is because the girl has my name (Amy, not Amelia...) but I LOVE it. It's so interesting. I hope you do update soon, regardless of the time that's passed so far. Even though I even abandon stories and stuff, I hate it when others do... but I understand an all. But I SO wish it'd be continued :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() i knw you might not update again and your busy with your life. but you should know that this story is very good, and its definately a story worth having an ending to. i hope you consider updating its really worth it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I am liking this story so far. There are a few spelling/grammatical errors, and some of it is cliched (but that's nearly impossible to avoid, so no worries). You really delve into your characters, especially with Amy and her relationship with Sam. I look forward to seeing how you develop all the relationships further. One error that did catch my eye: you wrote that Jules' mother, a psychiatrist, was holding a dinner for her clients. Psychiatrists are bound by a confidentiality code and hosting such an occasion, which would require her patients to reveal their identities simply by attending, would be illegal and she could lose her license for doing so. That's all. Great job, can't wait to read more :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() OH MY GOSH THIS IS SO AMAZING I ABSOLUTLY LOVE THIS STORY! I LOVE WES! HE'S SO AMAZING, but Trent is just so adorable... I'd choose Wes though. Trent needs someone that will care for him. It proves it that Amy loves Wes more because she couldn't stop thinking about him and she wore the neckalace on their date. STUPID GRANDMA. :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aw. Its the last chap. Are you ever continuing this? Please do, I love it. You generally have flawless spelling, and as far as can see, you have brilliant grammar and punctuation as well. Dont worry, I am from Australia so I am used to weird spelling but it is so refreshing to see those 'u's in there. Thanx for at least doing this much, I hope you decide to continue, Rosalie Abigail |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awesome first chapter. |