really good! had me hooked from chapt 1 ! :D keep writing!

Why haven't you updated? I love the story. I was kinda of upset when Mac died... but when Spiral... I Cried so hard and i'm still crying... *Sniffles* Please update! *Hug* PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE

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can you please write more soon. I keep looking for this story every now and then hoping for more chapters, as in plural, and find that there is either none or one. its kinda sad as this is a brilliant story and its months between each time i look. i think your creativity and flair for writting is so far un matched in the werewolf story department. i cant wait for more.

Hey there. I've followed the story since I first found it, and I just never got around to giving you a review, and you deserve it. It's a great story, I love it. It's creative, and it leaves you thinking at the end of your chapters, which I think is a good quality in a story. Can't wait to read more updates from you, so update soon!

NO! Please put up another chapter soon! This is such a great story and it's so addicting!

Wonderful plot. I am really enjoying this story, completely captivated. Sometimes when i'm reading something i'll skip over parts, but that has never happened in this one :). I really enjoy Heaven's character along with all the others. I also have to say you're amazing at picking out the proper quotes for each chapter.

Please update soon!

-yellers

that is a total curve ball there

OMG OMG OMG

I am so glad that you are still writing, all I can say is keep it up and keep on writing! i know ur probably really busy, but i a absolutly cannot wait till the next chapter is up!

cliff-hanger much?

u r totally awesome

sucker-4-green-eyes!

Finally a new chapter, please don't make us wait that long again! The the chapter was good, liked how it focused on both Heaven and Thunder dealing without each other. Wonder who Nathan is... Keep up the good work!

Great Chapterness! Good job!

Oh look she has company now. At least that'll stop things from being boring now won't they? lol.

Nathan, what? who's Nathan? sorry it took so long to review, but I am now! awesome chapter by the way!

i cant believe tat mac n tyr died so sad...

wow... a really nice story. i really like it. i wonder if thunder would really kill heaven.. well i juss have 2 read 2 find out so plz update soon. keep up the good work.