Reviews for Flammable
Badger In Disguise chapter 2 . 5/27/2009
that really stinks, it was a wonderful story. I just loved the whole concept, it made you realize the true brutality of the world and I am extrenely sad to see such a great story pulled away from where other writers can read it and enjoy the wonders of your writing

This is out of the blue, but...

Would you beta my new story Spilt Blood?
anon chapter 21 . 1/18/2009
I saw this ending comming. It makes me sad, but I respect you for it. :D
Badger In Disguise chapter 21 . 11/30/2008
A truly well-written peice. The cruel injustice of the world is never kind to those different. Some people dont care enough to consider how it might effect other for even a second before doing something as awful as killing another human being. This piece, i believe, shows the true world,not the world in which everything ends perfectly depicted in many other stories.

I honestly cannot give you any advice to make the story any better, it's already perfect as it is. Dont ever change it, no matter how many flames you get from jealous people.

Until Next Time
MzKit10 chapter 1 . 10/21/2007
Beautifully written and perfectly sad. Usually i'm against sad endings but this felt...right almost. very well written and Congratualtions on finishing it. Its wonderful

FM Radio chapter 10 . 9/14/2007
You have the women’s head spinning. You used the plural form of woman. It should be woman's.
Twilight Starr chapter 21 . 9/1/2007
Sad ending.

I almost cried.

~Twilight Starr~
Twilight Starr chapter 20 . 9/1/2007
It is so sad!

~Twilight Starr~
Twilight Starr chapter 19 . 9/1/2007
Cute flashback.

The mom and the sister are very cruel people.

~Twilight Starr~
Twilight Starr chapter 18 . 9/1/2007
Uh-oh. She was caught.

At least she found a use to help people with her ability.

~Twilight Starr~
Twilight Starr chapter 17 . 9/1/2007
Wonderful chapter.

It's very sweet. :)

~Twilight Starr~
Twilight Starr chapter 16 . 9/1/2007
Another cute, lovely chapter.

I like the wedding scene.

~Twilight Starr~
Twilight Starr chapter 15 . 9/1/2007
Cute chapter.

It made me smile. :)

~Twilight Starr~
Twilight Starr chapter 14 . 9/1/2007
I like Vevina.

This chapter explains a lot.

~Twilight Starr~
Twilight Starr chapter 13 . 9/1/2007
Interesting chapter.

~Twilight Starr~
Twilight Starr chapter 12 . 9/1/2007
He really loves her. :)

~Twilight Starr~
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