OMG pleaaaaase continue! I love all of this! You're writing and storytelling and all that is way better than the other writers hear that I come across so far, I hope you pick this up again!

Also, the main character is fabulous. I love Her!

I wanted to pm you but your pm feature is disabled, Your story is magnificent in it's own unique way. You wouldn't probably understand what it feels like to start reading a great story like this and suddenly it just stops and your starving to know what happens next That's my situation here, maybe you will never update it, maybe you will but that too years later, but that will be better than not updating.
So please i beg you update and Finish it.

well, first I thought I'd let you know I really enjoy your story. A bit confused at how she is linked to a vampire and Chase and Morgan's role but the next few chapters should explain it, yeah? haha, please update!

I LOVE IT :D fantastic, witty and love the girl (;

i don't know why but when i think of chase, i think of will ferrell from blades of glory XD

This is a good read. A very good read. Once I started I couldn't stop reading, and when I got to this chapter I admit I swore at my computer a little bit because there wasn't more to read. I enjoyed the vampire mythology you used, it was refreshing to find some original writing on fictionpress that isn't a cheap rip off of the Twilight-verse vampire mythology. Your writing is face paced and action filled. I enjoy how Kayla is more than just a two-dimensional 'vampire hunter' stereotype, and am very intrigued about Starvos' proposition. Thanks for some exciting entertaining.

oohh so stavros would want her to kill mikhial?

I absolutely love this story and I can't wait to see the next installment! You do first person perspective awesomely well, and Kayla's personality shines through in every sentence - it's a joy to read.

One thing I'd like to see more of is Kayla's fight skills; she's been mentioned as a skilled hunter several times, yet we never actually *see* it in any of the fight scenes. She does well, but she doesn't quite seem to measure up to the reputation she's got? I'd love to see her kick some serious ass sometime without having to get rescued by her leading man. xD (I'm a sucker for strong heroines, can you tell?)

You've got a really good story going here, and again, I can't wait for the next chapter! Thank you for sharing your creation with us.

Loved it and can't wait for more! I wonder what he wants her to do! I know it is going to be good and can't wait!

-lionandthelamblove7

WHY WHY WHY are all your chapters cliffies?

But OMG Chase still makes me melt. And Stavros. YUM! You have so many well thought out characters who - plus - are super hot. I think that takes a lot of skill to make a character more than a pretty face, which is nice. Although I would LOVE to see more Chase characterisation because so far there has been minimal of that.

Anyway, loved it and I hope you can update weekly anyway!

amazing chapter.

i love the chaos and stavros and his power just scream evil. kayla's sarcastic thoughts throughout made me laugh.

ooh, chase is showing his more protective side of kayla. i wonder if there's more to his actions...especially when he said she was his.

a job hmm? maybe stavros is gonna try and exploit the link between kayla and mikhail - either way i can't wait to see what he's planning. he can't be trusted. ;)

poor kayla. she's just a dead hunter walking. looks like gaspard will be crossing her off his christmas list.

keep it coming. i love reading this. ;)

great chapter!

Really cool story and very well-written. Chase makes me melt slightly :) Update soon! I really really need to see what happens next.

awesome! you sure know how to keep your readers hooked. interesting chapter. hmm, maybe stavros is looking to get kayla on his side... shouldn't be too hard since she hates mikhail.

i hope stavros is introduced in the next chapter. great work. i love it. ;)

I love this story! Please, please update soon. It is so good!

I love it!

-lionandthelamblove7