Reviews for Leaping Chocolate
Ancamna chapter 1 . 2/21/2007
Is this how your mind works? Then no wonder I'm confused when I talk to you for too long. _ Just kidding. I really like the story. I like how it jumps around. That makes it confusing in some places, and often the long sentences don't help, but confusing isn't necessarily bad. It adds to the character of the piece. Alright, normally I think confusing is bad, but I don't mind it here.