|Reviews for Freefall|
| Aquafied chapter 1 . 2/19/2007
it was miserable today
it makes me miserable
that should not be healthy
rain bleeding...similar to a bleeding nation
| eldrin chapter 1 . 2/19/2007
Love "bleeding rain." What a wonderful piece!
| Basara chapter 1 . 2/19/2007
wow, the ecosystem indeed... in a new style of decripting it...
| a silenced revolution chapter 1 . 2/18/2007
Quite interesting. I like the concept of "bleeding rain". Good haiku.
| On My Way Out chapter 1 . 2/18/2007
you make me jealous whenever i read anything you write.
omce again, beautiful imagery; especially love the phrases "bleeding rain" and "earthly connections"
titale is perfect for this haiku
wonderful job on this one!