Reviews for Freefall
Aquafied chapter 1 . 2/19/2007
it was miserable today

it makes me miserable

that should not be healthy

rain bleeding...similar to a bleeding nation
eldrin chapter 1 . 2/19/2007
Love "bleeding rain." What a wonderful piece!
Basara chapter 1 . 2/19/2007
wow, the ecosystem indeed... in a new style of decripting it...

a silenced revolution chapter 1 . 2/18/2007
Quite interesting. I like the concept of "bleeding rain". Good haiku.
On My Way Out chapter 1 . 2/18/2007
you make me jealous whenever i read anything you write.

omce again, beautiful imagery; especially love the phrases "bleeding rain" and "earthly connections"

titale is perfect for this haiku

wonderful job on this one!