|Reviews for Echo|
| a silenced revolution chapter 1 . 2/20/2007
Interesting figurative meanings. Good haiku.
| no.peace.los.angeles chapter 1 . 2/19/2007
Hmm, a nice piece. Not as image-full as some of your other pieces, but just call me a sucker for imagery. I still like the sound of this - the use of the verb "cascades" works nicely in this. Keep writing! :)
| eldrin chapter 1 . 2/19/2007
This really puts me into a mind of poetry, into the making of it, it seems. Rather gorgeous.
| Basara chapter 1 . 2/19/2007
the search for clarity... truth... wisdom...
| Cobster chapter 1 . 2/18/2007
Actually, a real haiku has some indication of what season you're writing about, as well as a reference to nature. I didn't know that either until a while ago.
But this is a good poem regardless. It reminds me of a song a friend of mine wrote (here comes the plug) and she's actually a brilliant musician! If you like rock/blues at all, go to and listen to Caverns. It also reminded me of Danielewski's House of Leaves. Anyway, I thought this poem provided some good insight into the darker, mysterious side of humans, how we all seek an understanding of places inside us that can never be completely illuminated.