Reviews for A Day at a Time: Haikus of a Student |
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![]() ![]() ![]() 'Stuck in the middle Between the past and future Present is prison' I really like this one! Nice collection, I really enjoyed reading it! ;) |
![]() ![]() ![]() 'It is a nice day To take in Nature's beauty And forget the world' M, that's a nice one. :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() 'Catcher in the Rye' sounds like 'catched her in the eye'. Very clever! :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Haiku - an interesting way to write a diary! ;o 'i studied her instead' nice line. 'God will not miss me' don't say that. D: |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great poems! They're well-written, cute, and entertaining! |
![]() ![]() ![]() a small diary of life's major events... well, some part are sweet and other's are saddening... come to think of it. it's very normal to feel and expirience something... nice... |
![]() ![]() ![]() i love the math one the best. "i hate math and it hates me" too true. only, i wish in the line where you said "except for in her" you said instead "except for her smile" or something similar - it would imply that you pay attention to sweet details like that, rather than just saying she's hot overall. :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() "i studied her instead." hehe - it reminds me of how i took anatomy and physiology last year. never, take that class. it also reminds me of how yesterday in art i stole a picture of James Franco that the teacher had laminated in the 'pictures you can pick from' bin. it's now in my locker. this is just so clever. |
![]() ![]() ![]() wow, this is so creatively awesome! hehe, I love the haiku about needing a sponge bath for dirty thoughts. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love this idea of a haiku a day. I really liked the one with the ending line "God will not miss me" by far the best one. I also like the theme of this girl Alexa...altho it does sound a bit obsessive thats what I like about it. Some of them are a bit to simple but for the most part they are very interesting. Keep working on it! |