Reviews for My Knight Named Bob
His Mercy's Waiting chapter 1 . 2/19/2007
Oh, I see! :)

Man, I love the honesty innocence in this poem. It sounds like a little girl is saying it-in a good way!

There was one line that was kind of strange to me though: "I love you more than air". It makes sense that we need air, since without it we would die, but frankly, I've never heard anyone say they love air. :) Just my thoughts.

Keep writing!