Reviews for The Beating of a Lifetime
His Mercy's Waiting chapter 1 . 2/19/2007
Good imagery and emotion in this.

"The bruise forms form his hand"
Cobalt65 chapter 1 . 2/18/2007
You decribed exactly how you felt, my girlfriend went through something like this, multiple times, everything in this poem says everything she has said to me about it. I listened to her dreams sometimes, not good.

This is perfect, dont change it, not one bit.