Reviews for The Beating of a Lifetime |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Good imagery and emotion in this. "The bruise forms form his hand" |
![]() ![]() ![]() You decribed exactly how you felt, my girlfriend went through something like this, multiple times, everything in this poem says everything she has said to me about it. I listened to her dreams sometimes, not good. This is perfect, dont change it, not one bit. |