Reviews for Written in the Rain
dawn's unforgiving darkness chapter 10 . 4/28/2007
123123123123123po chapter 10 . 4/28/2007
i love love love
Murphy's Lawyer chapter 10 . 4/28/2007
Well, I suppose nothing good ever lasts, but still... you're an awful, terrible person. That's mean of you, what you did to Kate, especially when she's already been through so much. You're mean. Mean, mean, mean. And Sara better talk some sense into John or else I'm gonna be very mad.

All in all, still a good chapter... but things BETTER WORK OUT! Social stations be damned, Stapleton better set things straight with Kate!

- LL
dogsrock3 chapter 10 . 4/28/2007
wow, i knew Fred would do something bad! i wonder how this will play out.
ihrtbks chapter 10 . 4/27/2007
I love this story, but then I love all your stories. Poor Sarah. Poor Kate. John is so stupidly noble it's crazy.

Fallen-Rose-Petals-16 chapter 10 . 4/27/2007
Aww... poor Kate. Both John and Lord S are being very stupid.
Being in Room 101 chapter 10 . 4/27/2007
Aw, sad chapter :(
SitaDarkAngel chapter 10 . 4/27/2007
I'm SHOCKED! That's all I can say...I'm SHOCKED! He broke up with her!

I'm at loss of words...I just...Oh My God! I can't believe it...It's getting more and more interesting...

And I can't help but wonder what will happen when Sara will know what happened between her uncle and Kate?

And John...John...A very proud and loyal young man...Far too proud and far too loyal sometimes : He's practically giving up on his happiness because he feels for his sister's pain and loss...

I can't believe that Fred dared to call her a whore, and I can't believe that John didn't go and find him and knocked him out. But I believe that is because Kate didn't tell John the name calling part (at least I think so...)

Well, this chapter was gut wrenching...and it kinda brought my anger out. Anger toward Fred, anger toward Lord S and toward John...

I can't wait for the next chapter...

Here some donuts for you...Take care till next time.
emerald chapter 10 . 4/26/2007
Hell, I hope she doesn't let him walk away. This doesn't have to turn into an issue between them, seriously. *sigh* He can't just up and leave, they have history, he was going to ask her to marry him and he loves her and she him. You better update soon and with some good news in it.
OoohLookACat chapter 10 . 4/26/2007

two break ups in one.

that's gotta suck.

can't wait for the next one

i can tell sara's determined.

she won't let him get away like that.

(makes it sound like he did something bad!)

i liked the chapter

even though it was sad.

volopurus chapter 10 . 4/26/2007

Some people should just go rot in holes. Fred.
arouralai chapter 10 . 4/26/2007
why must you end a chappie like that? evil...

very nice!
swimchickslam chapter 10 . 4/26/2007
Rawr Fred [
ilovehorses chapter 10 . 4/26/2007
this is really good so far...i hope u update soon :)
Highlands chapter 10 . 4/26/2007
you are right! totally hate fred... please hurry! cant wait for the next chapters
283 | « Prev Page 1 .. 8 9 10 11 12 13 14 .. Last Next »