|Reviews for pecans|
| tonight we bloom chapter 1 . 8/19/2009
I like this poem a lot. The subject is simple, but you've written it in such an innocent and beautiful way, and this reflects the tone of the little girl. All of it is just really beautiful.
I would love opinions on my work from a talented writer like yourself, it would really mean a lot to me!
| ham3 chapter 1 . 3/12/2007
Cool! I love pecans, too! I like the shortness of the lines of the poem.
| no.peace.los.angeles chapter 1 . 2/20/2007
I like this. It definitely has that Southern charm to it, and it's innocent, like a child wrote it. My favorite bits come between "one day we visted a plantation" and "and he said pecans." I think that the repetition there and just the way it's worded is so perfectly done. It's soft and rolling, and it shows the abundance of trees. So nice. Keep writing! :)