Reviews for Sweet Addiction: Just One Touch |
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![]() ![]() ![]() lol ending doesnt gave me idea if she will accept it or not hahahaha but yeah quite funny. .they are made for eachother yippie. hmm did she & he felt it? Ah what with blue-eye girl lexie he was going to fall for? hmm he never talk about Avy that way. .quite disappoint with Evan :/ |
![]() ![]() ![]() The problem I have with this chapter is that Evan's speaking way too properly. Using "hence" and "nonetheless" feels strange to read, expecially since I knw a bit abut hw he speaks to Ava. And I think I remember that Ava called Evan, "Even Anthony Emerson," but meh, it's fine. :T Other then that, I'm excited to see what happens next. :) |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Oh my god, I've just found this story again! I used to love it so much, I'm re-reading it now. I see it hasn't been updated...:( I hope you're well, and I hope you re-visited this wonderful piece of work soon to finish it!:P Happy reading Kim xo |
![]() ![]() ![]() haha i liked it i hope she ends up with evan! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Love this story so much! Makes me laugh all time. Just wanted to point out that in one of the earlier chapters Ava said Evan's middle name was Anthony, but in this chapter it's Waldo (lol, by the way) so...yeah...you should really update. I've been waiting for EVER |
![]() ![]() ![]() Evan and Ava need to get together now! Not literally...that should be saved for marriage but the two ARE perfect for each other ) love the story it's funny! |
![]() ![]() ![]() please updattee! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Too Cute! |
![]() ![]() ![]() UPDATE! Please! |
![]() ![]() ![]() hi! i'm your new reader. i know evan likes ava but why you put lexie on the story? i bet aly isn't pregnant. please update soon |
![]() ![]() ![]() hmm... the story was just starting to go somewhere... finish pretty please? |
![]() ![]() ![]() AH GREAT :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Cool i think this story is growing on me cause it just gets better and better |
![]() ![]() ![]() ahh!wheres the rest!need to read more please! update soon:) |