This is fantastic! One of the actually good ones on this sight. It's a cliche, yeah, but it's a good one. I can't believe she's pregnant! Then why was he kissing Ariel? That's totally messed up. I think it's funny that each chapter title is a dessert. LoL. Well, update soon!

ok i dont know where to start first omg aly is pregnant thats not allowed abd two oh i just ava and even love it love it i cant wait till you up date i think im going to join ava in crying she is so going to have to get hunter back it noy allowed i tell heehee um...very good discriptions and imagery what can i say perfect

jez

WHO...

thats right!

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woww...so i liked the first part and then it just got even more complicated haha but i can't wait till your next chapter :]]

So, why is he kissing someone else if Aly is now pregnant? And please tell me this is the absolute end of her crush on him!

Wow, this book is amazing so far. I'm on the edge of my seat here as I read it. Your last chapter completely shocked me speachless lol... Can't wait to read the rest.

aly is pregnant, so he makes out with ariel- men are MORONS. i like this story anyway, though. evan is surprisingly turning out to be the lesser jerk

omg is it even possible to write one of these stories without having to throw a random teen pregnancy in as a plot device? i mean COME ON!

What? Aly's pregnant? I don't really care because I don't want to be with Hunter anyway. GO EVAN! Update soon.

if Aly's pregnant.. why is he kissing Ariel?

Lol bad way to meet your enemy after all those years huh

Typical Cliche story but it's pretty good.

Growr.

I think I'm in love with Evan. I want one. I really, really do. Because he's trying to help Ava get what she wants when he wants her so badly, and it's just... sweet. That he'd do something like that for her. (Although I'm sure that, if there was a zero per cent chance of him getting to kiss her, he wouldn't be nearly as... ready to do it?)

So yes. Why don't you just... write me into this story... and have Evan suddenly fall madly in love with me? It'd make my day just that much happier :) Or, you know, just let Ava... and Evan... make out some more so that Evan can be all happy and whatnot, because I love him and I love Ava and when you put them together it's like epic love all over :D

Rawr. I went to the mall yesterday, and the cute guy that works there... wasn't there. And I was sad, and said to myself, "Let there be Curtis!" But he didn't show up, and that made me sad all over again, until I found stickers and stuck them all over! Stickers are always fun, yep!

And I've missed your responses again, because you're just you and I'm just me and... we respond to each other? Or something along those lines. Either way, I miss it again. But at least this has been updated :D That's all that matters to me right now, because I love Evan and Evan loves Ava and Ava loves Evan but just doesn't know it yet. I'm not sure if I prefer this one or OSKAGS, but... these two are definitely my two favourites, so whichever isn't my absolute is my second favourite :D

Rawr. Update soon, yeah?

Oh... My... Freakin... Gosh...

My jaw just completely hit the ground.

I'm confuzzled myself! Not by the story, but by who I want Ava to be with. At first I wanted Hunter, but then he went and pulled that stupid stunt. I mean this is why we practice abstinence people! There are reasons for that!

But I dunno if I want her to be with Evan either. I mean he's kind of a jerk sometimes, but I think she's actually falling for him.

I really don't know, and I hope that you do! If I was writing this story, I would probably tear my hair out trying to figure out who she should be with. But you pull it off with no flaws.

The long chapter was awesome too D But before I ramble, it was an awesome chapter although I'm ticked off with Hunter and Aly. Hmmph.

I just have to tell you to update soon!

-Halani

Oh...Ava likes Evan! ] Nice. Hope some more action happens between the lovebirds, lol. Nice job.

chek it,

JRG